Tuesday, November 14, 2006

the boy's naked

_____at five o’ clock dark. We met in
October—like their song: “the trees are stripped bare … / but you
go on / And on.”
but still
___________tired__________kingdom;

rising – head a triangle without—

________an edge. Maybe then an arrow?

on & on & on

1 Comments:

Blogger valerie salerie said...

hmm..
a) a head without a triange rising
b) without head a triange rising
c) a head rising triangle without
d) without an edge triangle rising

just trying to also construct the arrow.
i like how the form is grammatically confusing to reflect the question of it being an arrow (at least this is what i think you're saying..)
Salo, would it be irreverent to ask you to explain this one..i'll let you do it in IPA

5:14 PM  

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